You will be writing more annotations later in the MBA program, and my only recs are that you make the content a bit more concise, and think about adding info on these two items: (1) limitations of the article/study [e.g., size of sample, populations (male versus female, combination, etc.), or geographical or context foci (one country only or one type of business/context)]; and (2) how the article might be used best by a researcher.